Thursday, March 24, 2011

The rain made me type this

They were so far removed from the world of the living, their hearts knew not which way to beat. Precariously perched on the edge of existence, pushing against harsh waves crashing against their fading efforts, slowly but surely sapping their strength. Just one look down told them of their sealed fate, a black abyss all that separated them from immeasurable darkness. They nodded to each other, and in this last act of mutual acknowledgment, a feeling of calm broke the tension that had been so prevalent in their last moments. They fell, and saw their future, so bright. So promising.

1 comment:

  1. Very Powerful! A great way and chioce of words to show movement - I love it.